Teacher Comments

Further to our conversation in class, action points to take forward from rough cut to final cut include:

- Re-edit so that titles and live action are intercut with one another.
- Edit the ambient sound in the opening shots (possibly remove it and add garage band music track?)
- Re-edit so that your total running time is approximately two minutes.
- Currently the events in the sequence do not make a whole lot of sense. Can I take it that they have not yet been edited into sequential order? Remember to edit for an unfamiliar audience. This has to look like an opening sequence.